Question

假如你是李華，你校外教Johnny準備周末去附近的云霧山探險旅游，寫信向你詢問注意事項。請你根據下列提示，給他回一封電子郵件。

1. 準備一張云霧山的地圖；

2. 查詢當地實時天氣，帶上必要的衣物、食品、藥品及手電筒( flashlight)；

3. 必要的話，找一位向導。

注意：1. 詞數：100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。

Dear Johnny,

I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice.                             ___________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Johnny,

I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice.

First of all, you should prepare a local map of Yunwu Mountain. Before starting, you should surf the Internet to look for some information about the weather on the weekend there so as to take enough clothes and food. Meanwhile, it’s necessary to take a flashlight and some medicines. Because there are few people living in the mountain, it’s good for you to find several friends to make this exciting journey with you together. If a local guide will serve you, it will be even better.

Special care should be taken while you travel in the mountain. I wish you a good time!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查書信類作文的寫作。是關于你校外教Johnny準備周末去附近的云霧山探險旅游，寫信向你詢問注意事項。請你根據下列提示，給他回一封電子郵件，具體信息已經給出，考點只需要適當串聯即可，在寫作的時候一定要使用合適的連接詞來連接全文，讓文章成為一個整體，同時要注意使用英語句型，也要使用倒裝句，定語從句等特殊的句式來提高文章的多樣性。如Because there are few people living in the mountain, it’s good for you to find several friends to make this exciting journey with you together.還要用適當的關聯詞把句與句連起來，如：  First of all，meanwhile等

考點：考查書信類作文的寫作

點評：本文屬于書信類作文，此類作文雖然好寫，但是要寫出特色是很不容易的。關鍵是要點要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫作的時候運用多種表達方式，讓句子有變化。