Question

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下一封信為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。信中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear sir,

I graduated this year and wanted to get a work. I thought I would be success, but eventually I failed. That was why I was so lazy that I didn’t want to go out. I always complained for the hot weather. And there was another reason nobody know about: I regarded myself as someone who couldn’t do anything lonely. I often felt less capably than others. When I found a company was advertising, I was even afraid to call to ask for detail. I wanted to make a move, and I was always disappointed. What should I do? I’m looking forward to receive your reply.                                                                                                                                                                        

                                                                         Yours

Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear sir,

I graduated this year and wanted to get a work. I thought I would be ^ success, but eventually I failed.

              ( 刪除a 或把work 改成job)    (插入a或把success改成successful)

That was why I was so lazy that I didn’t want to go out. I always complained for the hot weather. And there because of /about was another reason nobody know about: I regarded myself as someone who couldn’t do anything lonely. I knew alone often felt less capably than others. When I found a company was advertising, I was even afraid to call to ask capable for detail. I wanted to make a move, and I was always disappointed. What should I do? I’m looking details but forward to receive your reply.                                                                                                                                             receiving                                                                 Yours

Li Ming