Question

假設你是星光中學的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內容包括：

1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題； 2. 騎自行車的益處，如能環保有利健康等。

注意：1.詞數：120詞左右；演講稿開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。

      2.參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）   節能 (energy saving)

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.

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Thank you for listening!

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles". As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bring great convenience to our life. However, they have also some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.

How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’ t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because that they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.

Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!

 

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇演講稿，所以在語言的使用上要大眾化，另外注意題目的要求主要內容包括：1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題； 2. 騎自行車的益處，如能環保有利健康等。所以這些要點都要包括，注意不要有遺漏。本作文中給出的要點比較簡略,故需要充實文章內容，需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式。

考點：演講稿

點評：本文屬于演講稿，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。并且注意字數，120詞左右。