Question

假定你是“安妮文化”的宣傳大使，要在你校英文報(bào)上簡(jiǎn)要介紹安妮（Anne）在二戰(zhàn)期間的經(jīng)歷。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1．為躲避納粹追捕，與家人一起避難；

2．日記成為唯一可傾訴的朋友；

3．向往自由和大自然。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)1 00左右；

2．可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version

   Anne was a Jewish girl who lived in the Netherlands during World War II.

   She had to hide away with her family, so that they wouldn’t be caught by the German Nazis. During that time she made her diary her best friend, to which she could tell her deepest feelings and thoughts. Not having been able to be outdoors for so long, Anne was crazy about everything to do with nature. One evening, she stayed awake till midnight on purpose in order to enjoy the moon with the risk of being exposeD．How she wished she could regain freedom and experience nature herself!

Unfortunately, they were caught by the Nazis eventually and Anne died in a concentration camp in 1945.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇給出漢語(yǔ)提示的提綱類作文。文章只給出了簡(jiǎn)單的漢語(yǔ)提示，這需要考生充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將文章內(nèi)容流暢地表達(dá)出來(lái)。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.文章內(nèi)容要齊全；（1）為躲避納粹追捕，與家人一起避難；（2）可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）向往自由和大自然。

2.時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)；3.人稱：以第三人稱；4.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢。6.詞數(shù)控制在100左右。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】使用了從句：She had to hide away with her family, so that they wouldn’t be caught by the German Nazis. During that time she made her diary her best friend, to which she could tell her deepest feelings and thoughts.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：Not having been able to be outdoors for so long, Anne was crazy about everything to do with nature. One evening, she stayed awake till midnight on purpose in order to enjoy the moon with the risk of being exposed.

考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言的運(yùn)用能力。