Question

【題目】目前中學生中有很多人存在一些學習和生活上的心理問題。請你根據以下提示寫一篇題為“How to Be Mentally Healthy”的短文。
你的短文應包含以下內容：
1).心理問題的危害有哪些？
2).如何解決心理問題？（如：與同學朋友溝通，向心理老師尋求幫助等）
注意：1).可參照文章開頭所給提示，作必要的發揮想象；
2).詞數100左右（標題和開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數）；
3).文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。
參考詞匯：心理老師psychology teacher
How to Be Mentally Healthy
Many of us students now have some mental problems,which mainly come from our studies and lives.

Answer 1

【答案】How to Be Mentally Healthy

Many of us students now have some mental problems,which mainly come from our studies and lives.

Such problems have bad effects on students both physically and mentally.Some are so worried about exams that they can't fall asleep at night.As a result,they feel sleepy in the day time and can't concentrate in class.Others can't get along well with their parents or classmates.They always feel stressed and easily get angry.

In fact, there're many ways to handle our mental problems. Firstly, communication is important. When we talk about our problems with our friends,we can feel greatly relieved.Secondly,we can turn to our teachers or psychology teacher for help.Finally,we need to develop a positive attitude towards our studies and lives.I believe these methods will help us live and study happily.

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求寫一篇題為“How to Be Mentally Healthy”的短文。考慮用一般現在時來寫。要點：1.心理問題的危害有哪些? 2.如何解決心理問題?（如：與同學朋友溝通，向心理老師尋求幫助等）這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

本篇條理清楚，要點全面，結構連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：運用了結果狀語從句：Some are so worried about exams that they can't fall asleep at night.；時間狀語從句：When we talk about our problems with our friends,we can feel greatly relieved,和 get along well with， in fact, turn to，attitude towards 等詞匯。