Question

1．假定你是李華，你和朋友打算在校園網上成立一個英文讀書俱樂部．請你給美國筆友艾倫寫一封電子郵件，介紹該俱樂部擬開展的活動，并希望對方提出建議．要點如下：
1．活動形式、內容及心得；
2．請艾倫提出建議．
注意：1．詞數100左右；
2．適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3．格式和開頭語已給出，但不計入總詞數．
Dear Allan，
How is everything going？I'm delighted to tell you that my friends and I have decided to set up an English reading club on our school website．The activities we have planned are as follows．
Firstly，we are going to organize reading activities regularly．Secondly，club members will be encouraged to communicate with each other online about the books they've read，which will allow them to have a better understanding of the books．Besides，excellent books will be recommended so that club members can have access to more books that are worth reading．
I would appreciate it if you can give me some advice．Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
I'm delighted to tell you that my friends and I have decided to set up an English reading club on our school website．
我很高興地告訴你，我和我的朋友已經決定在我們學校的網站上建立一個英語閱讀俱樂部．
高分句型二：
Secondly，club members will be encouraged to communicate with each other online about the books they've read，which will allow them to have a better understanding of the books．
其次，俱樂部的成員將被鼓勵互相網上關于他們讀過的書進行交流，這將使他們能夠有一個更好的理解對于書．

解答 Dear Allan，
      How is everything going？I'm delighted to tell you that my friends and I have decided to set up an English reading club on our school website．The activities we have planned are as follows（高分句型一）．
      Firstly，we are going to organize reading activities regularly．Secondly，club members will be encouraged to communicate with each other online about the books they've read，which will allow them to have a better understanding of the books（高分句型二）．Besides，excellent books will be recommended so that club members can have access to more books that are worth reading．
      I would appreciate it if you can give me some advice．Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯想，自由發揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．