Question

請你根據(jù)以下表格提示，寫一篇120詞左右的英語短文，并闡明自己從中得到的啟發(fā)。

時間	2006年9月28日
地點	美國佛羅里達州（Florida）
事件	超過二十一萬名中學生參加一項集體朗誦活動
結(jié)果	締造不同地點、同時（simultaneously）大聲朗讀同一篇文章的吉尼斯世界記錄
意義	培養(yǎng)學生的閱讀興趣和合作精神
對你的啟發(fā)	……

Answer 1

On September 28, 2006, more than 210,000 middle school students in Florida took part in a reading activity, successfully breaking the Guinness World Record for the “Most People Reading Aloud Simultaneously in Multiple Locations”.
This event not only developed students’ interest in reading but also taught them the importance of cooperation. With the help of their teachers, they eventually achieved their goal and won a place in the Guinness Book of World Records.
It reminds me that as students, we should have big dreams, but we must realize that only through hard work and cooperation can we succeed in the end.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】這篇范文的特點是句式多變，On September 28, 2006, more than 210,000 middle school students in Florida took part in a reading activity, successfully breaking the Guinness World Record for the “Most People Reading Aloud Simultaneously in Multiple Locations”.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， This event not only developed students’ interest in reading but also taught them the importance of cooperation. 這句話用了not only…but also…結(jié)構(gòu)， It reminds me that as students, we should have big dreams, but we must realize that only through hard work and cooperation can we succeed in the end.說句話用了賓語從句和倒裝句。