Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)
在班級(jí)活動(dòng)中，當(dāng)你的想法與大多數(shù)同學(xué)不一致時(shí)，你是堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)并說服別人，還是尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見？請(qǐng)你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題，用英文寫一篇100～120個(gè)詞“短文。要求如下：
1.從以上兩種做法中選擇一種；
2.以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。
注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認(rèn)定。
When I Have a Different Opinion

Answer 1

【答案】范文一 When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.
The main reason for my choice is that being brought in a culture emphasizing collectivisism;I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum.I would love to go to a museum,but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic,Without hesetation,I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day,Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.
范文二 When I Have a Different Open on
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation,
When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it 。By doing so ,I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.
Once we were discussing where to go for an outing .Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace .I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea . We did have a good time that day .Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.
An alternative student version
【解析】：本篇書面表達(dá)陳述觀點(diǎn)及理由。
寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：
1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確從以上兩種做法中選擇一種，是堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)并
說服別人還是遵從大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見；
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定
邏輯關(guān)系來寫。
3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。但是在以具體事例闡述的
時(shí)候使用過去時(shí)
4注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。
本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)．比如not only...but also...不僅而且。
運(yùn)用連詞while表達(dá)對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)。運(yùn)用because表達(dá)原因。
運(yùn)用了表語從句表達(dá)原因The main reason for my choice is that。。。
運(yùn)用了賓語從句decidewhether do have a...; discuss where to go for an outing
運(yùn)用了介詞短語By doing so, Without hesitation
運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句we did have a lots of fun that day.
此外，文章還使用了大量習(xí)語和短語，如 be worth doing sth; stick to sth; have a good time; have lots of fun, tend to do等
一篇篇好的文章除了書寫工整，還需要條理清晰以及充分利用各種句式和語法表達(dá)可以適當(dāng)?shù)赜洃浺恍┍?/span>
達(dá)的模板，比如說總結(jié)，開頭和結(jié)尾。