Question

假設你是李華。最近你班舉行了一次班會，班會的主題是：太空探險的意義。請結合下表內容，給校報用英語寫一篇文章，客觀地介紹討論的情況并表達你自己的觀點。

一些同學贊同	一些同學反對	你自己的觀點
●獲得新的知識	●耗資巨大
●從太空取得新資源	●宇航員的安全問題
●擴大人類的生存空間

注意：1．字數：100詞左右。

2．標題與開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數

Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO?

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Answer 1

We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.

Some of us hold it important to research the outer space for the reasons as follows. First of all, people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their exploration. Second, new resources can be found there for human use. Third, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for human beings.

However, others think quite differently. They said this kind of exploration is much too costly. Besides, it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.

In my opinion, people should be pioneering, and therefore such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是對太空探險的意義的不同觀點，題目給出了大部分要點，也要考生給出自己的觀點。文章結構清晰，先是一些同學反對的觀點，然后是贊同的觀點，還有無所謂的態度，最后是自己的觀點，要求考生用地道的英語表達自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯起來，使文章成為一個整體。

【亮點說明】范文結構清晰，語言流暢，多用詞組和句型：bring about產生， In my opinion在我看來, are worth trying out值得試驗.We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.這句話用了賓語從句，Some of us hold it important to research the outer space for the reasons as follows.這句話用了it做形式賓語， it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.這句話用了it做形式主語。還有范文還使用了First of all, Second, Third, Besides,這樣的關聯詞，使文章更加連貫。

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