Question

假設你是學生李華，英國學生Peter去年來你校學習，一年學習期滿準備新年前回

國。請你代表全班同學寫一篇歡送辭，內容包括：

1.同學關系融洽；

2.英語學習氛圍更濃；

3.保持聯系，歡迎再來。

注意：1.詞數100左右。（不包括已給出的首句詞數）

2.文章應包括所有要點。

Dear friends,

Today we are having a farewell party to honor our friend Peter.______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Possible version:

Dear friends,

Today we are having a farewell party to honor our friend Peter. He is going back to his homeland before the New Year. In the past year Peter and all of us have been on good terms. Also we have helped each other and become good friends. Thank you Peter for being a part of this class! We have a better atmosphere of English learning so we have become more interested in English and have made great progress. We really appreciate your help and friendship.

Dear Peter, we will miss you and we all hope that we can keep in touch. Expecting you to come back some day. Good luck, Peter. May you have a pleasant journey home!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇歡送辭，所以要用第一人稱來寫。需要些的內容已經給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內容，使文章看起來更充實。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數100左右，不要太多也不要太少。

考點：歡送辭類作文

點評：本文屬于歡送辭類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。