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4．隨著現代科技發展，機器人已經來到我們身邊，給人們生活帶來便利．請根據下表所述內容，介紹家用機器人基本情況，并就如何更好地利用機器人為我們服務提出建議．
簡介家用機器人外觀時尚，使用范圍廣泛，受到人們的歡迎．
主要功能1．煮飯、清掃房間；
2．照顧、陪伴老人；
3．處理緊急事件，撥打電話拯救生命．
存在問題 1．技術不夠成熟，存在安全隱患；
2．價格偏高，普通家庭消費不起．
你的建議…（至少兩點）
注意：1．對所有要點逐一陳述，適當發揮．
2．詞數120左右．開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數．
3．作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名．
參考詞匯：家用機器人household robots
With the development of modern science and technology，robots have entered our lives，which brings great convenience to us．Household robots，which are widely used and popular with people，look cool and have many types．（高分句型一）
Household robots have many functions．Firstly，they can be used to cook and clean rooms．Secondly，they can help to take care of the elder people，and spend time chatting or playing chess with them．Moreover，they can even make calls for help in case of emergency．
On the other hand，the technologyused in household robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems．（高分句型二）What's more，the price is too high for commonpeople to afford it．
Personally，robots should be used to improve people's lives．Meanwhile，more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be brought down as well．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息隨著現代科技發展，機器人已經來到我們身邊，給人們生活帶來便利．請根據下表所述內容，介紹家用機器人基本情況，并就如何更好地利用機器人為我們服務提出建議，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：簡介家用機器人外觀時尚，使用范圍廣泛，受到人們的歡迎．主要功能1．煮飯、清掃房間；照顧、陪伴老人；處理緊急事件，撥打電話拯救生命．存在問題 技術不夠成熟，存在安全隱患；價格偏高，普通家庭消費不起．你的建議…（至少兩點）  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Moreover而且；in case of以防，萬一；On the other hand另一方面；What's more而且；Personally就…個人而言；Meanwhile同時；
Household robots，which are widely used and popular with people，look cool and have many types．（高分句型一）
On the other hand，the technology used in household robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems．（高分句型二）
Meanwhile，more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be brought down as well．（高分句型三）

解答       With the development of modern science and technology，robots have entered our lives，which brings great convenience to us．
      Household robots，which are widely used and popular with people，look cool and have many types．（高分句型一）
      Household robots have many functions．Firstly，they can be used to cook and clean rooms．Secondly，they can help to take care of the elder people，and spend time chatting or playing chess with them．Moreover，they can even make calls for help in case of emergency．
      On the other hand，the technology used in household robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems．（高分句型二）What's more，the price is too high for common people to afford it．
       Personally，robots should be used to improve people's lives．Meanwhile，more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be brought down as well．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．