Question

書面表達（滿分35分）

今年暑假你和你的朋友對高二學生進行了一次家訪和調查，學生的反饋情況見下表。請你以“What I want to speak out most?”為題，寫一篇 100詞左右的短文。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

對校長	對老師	對家長
1、創造良好的校園環境 2、讓大家勞逸結合 3、多傾聽學生的心聲	1、增加自主思考的時間 2、笑臉是陽光，上課不要太嚴肅	1、多理解我們 2、給我們更多獨立思考的空間

What I want to speak out most?

As a Senior 2 student, I have many things in mind to speak out.

                                                                            

                                                                             

 

Answer 1

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What I want to speak out most?

As a Senior 2 student, I have many things in mind to speak out.

First, to the headmaster, I'd like to suggest creating a better environment for us to live and study in. As you know, we devote all the time to our lessons, so we'd like to have more time to relax. Besides, we hope to have more communication with you so that you can know more about our opinions. Second , to the teachers, we hope you can give us more free time to think for ourselves and smile more in class. Because smile is sunshine; don't be so serious! Finally, to our parents, we expect you to have a better understanding of us. Meanwhile, to be independent, we need more space of our own. (112 words)

【解析】略