Question

【題目】仔細觀察下面一幅圖畫，根據圖畫的內容，寫一篇詞數100左右的英語短文。

情景：假定你叫李華，家住香港。你和幾個朋友約定星期六在中心公園聚會。現請你寫封信邀請在學校居住的Brown女士參加，并根據下圖告訴她來中心公園的路線。

參考詞匯：have a gathering party(聚會)

這是一篇圖畫說明文，根據圖畫，指明路線，如何到達中心公園。注意觀察圖畫，確定出發點、行走路線、目的地，靈活使用表達路線的表達語。

Dear Mrs Brown,

We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. ____________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mrs Brown,

We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe you've been there, haven't you?

Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street. Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No. 7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop. Central Park is just in front of it. We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake. What a funny thing! Do come on time. We'll wait for you at the park gate.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：仔細觀察下面一幅圖畫，根據圖畫的內容，寫一篇詞數100左右的英語短文。

情景：假定你叫李華，家住香港。你和幾個朋友約定星期六在中心公園聚會。現請你寫封信邀請在學校居住的Brown女士參加，并根據下圖告訴她來中心公園的路線。

這是一篇圖畫說明文，根據圖畫，指明路線，如何到達中心公園。注意觀察圖畫，確定出發點、行走路線、目的地，靈活使用表達路線的表達語。要把所提示的點寫全，可根據內容要點適當增加細節，寫作時要注意準確運用時態、語態、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。一定避免全部使用簡單句。

【亮點說明】We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday.在此句中使用了結果狀語從句；Maybe you've been there, haven't you?此句是反意疑問句，在書面表達中出現實屬罕見；Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street.本句運用了祈使句，簡潔明了；Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No. 7 bus stop.祈使句加上表示將來的陳述句來指路，最為直接；What a funny thing!此句運用了感嘆句，非常恰當；Do come on time.強調謂語的運用使文章更顯得有特點。