Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處,錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

 Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew the accident. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate,

         ago(兩年前)        I多余         Unfortunately（用副詞修飾一句話）

I had an accident

and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents,

                                                    weeks（two后面用復(fù)數(shù)形式）

so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because/but                                   would（這里用過去將來(lái)時(shí)）               me（不需要用反身代詞，用賓格就可以了）

I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew the accident. Therefore,

       Far（so后面要接原級(jí)）

told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew∧ truth. I

interesting （用形容詞修飾名詞）                                                   the（特指truth）

still think that it was the right thing to do.

【解析】如上