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I sometimes argue with my mother about if I can watch TV after school. She holds the
view which Senior students have to devote all their time to work hard at their lessons. It
seems to me that once I allowed to do that, I’ll be unable to control me and forget all about
my study .She also thinks it is bad for my eye. Actually I quite understand her, but I really
couldn’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard
work .Besides, it is important for us to know what have happened at home and at abroad.
Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

Answer 1

 I sometimes argue with my mother about if I can watch TV after school. She
whether
holds the view which senior students have to devote all their time to work hard at
that                                       working
their lessons. It seems to me that once I∧allowed to do that, I’ll be unable to control
am 或去掉I
me and forget all about my study .She also thinks it is bad for my eye. Actually I
myself                                                 eyes
quite understand her, but I really couldn’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch
can’t                            watching
TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard work .Besides, it is important for
us to know what have happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be
has                   去掉at 
forbidden to watch TV.

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