Question

隨著網絡的普及，越來越多的中學生上網交友。某英語報社就“Should students make friends online?”這個主題進行了征文大賽。請你給英語報社投一篇稿子。

內容要點：1. 網上交友的優點。

2. 網上交友的弊端。

3. 你自己的看法。

要求：1．詞數不少于100；（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）。

2．內容充實，結構完整，語言連貫；

Should Students Make Friends Online?

Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends._______________________________

                                                                                       

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Should Students Make Friends Online?

  Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.

The Internet helps students make as many friends as they want easily. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely. Thus they can also ease their anxiety from their studies. Some students even get help with their foreign language studies.

However, each coin has two sides. Making friends online can no doubt waste much of students’ precious time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students sometimes get cheated online.

In my opinion, students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文的話題是“Should students make friends online?”上網的優點和缺點。優點方面可以從在網上可以獲取有用的信息，和世界各地的人保持聯系，可以自由發表個人的觀點等方面展開；缺點可以從網絡安全性，以及網絡游戲上癮等方面進行展開。寫作時需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：考查半開放性作文寫作

點評：半開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。