Question

【題目】假設你是李華，計劃本周末和同學一起去河邊植樹。請給外教 Nancy 寫一份郵件，邀請她一同前往。內容包括：
1).集合時間及地點；
2).活動安排及提醒；
3).午餐及返程時間。
注意：1).詞數 100 左右；
2).可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Nancy,
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Nancy,

My classmates and I intend to plant trees by the river this weekend. I am writing to invite you to go with us together.

According to our schedule, we will leaver from our school at 8 o'clock in the morning and return at around 4 o'clock in the afternoon. Considering that it is not far from our school, we decided to walk there. So you'd better wear a pair of comfortable shoes and bring some drinking water. By the way, we've already prepared enough tools, so there is no need for you to bring some. It would be better if you could bring some necessary tools.

After that, we want to have a picnic to relax ourselves. I really hope you can join us if it is convenient for you.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本文是提綱類作文，寫作時，首先仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清提供的所有信息，判斷文章的人稱和時態，應該用第一人稱，時態用一般現在時。其次要明確要點：1.集合時間及地點；2.活動安排及提醒；3.午餐及返程時間。注意要在提綱的范圍內進行分析，構思和想象，不要遺漏要點，要依據提示情景和語句，按照一定的邏輯來寫，使用適當的過渡詞增強文章的流暢性。最后注意要多使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。