Question

下表是對某中學高二某班50個學生健康問題的調查表。請根據表格內容，綜述學生當前存在的健康問題，并就中學生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建議。

問題類型	學習焦慮	逆反心理	缺乏交往	睡眠不足	缺乏鍛煉	視力不佳
人數	35	20	15	40	25	35
比例	70%	40%	30%	80%	50%	70%

注意：1. 詞數：120左右  2．參考詞匯：學習焦慮learning anxiety

3．首句已給，不計入總詞數。

As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally,                                              ______ 

                                                                      

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of the students having learning anxiety as well as poor eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep. Coming next is the lack of physical exercise. 40% of the students surveyed won’t obey their parents or teachers. Still fewer claim not to have enough communication with others.

As far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body, one cannot achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only to studies. Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems. Only in this way can we lead a healthy life.

【解析】本文是一份調查表，在審題的時候，一定要注意本文的時態，調查報告一般使用現在時。同上注意分數百分數的表達法，在寫作的時候要注意使用高級詞匯和句型如倒裝句，強調句等。也要使用合適的連接詞如As far as I am concerned，Therefore等讓文章更有條理。