Question

在我們的生活和學習中，與人合作是非常重要的。請你根據下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為 “Cooperate with others”的英文演講稿。請寫在答題紙相應橫線上。

為何與人合作	可以高效地完成任務； 可以節省時間和精力； 可以從合作者身上學到很多。
與誰合作	與喜歡的人合作	心情愉快，一起分享工作中的快樂和痛苦。
與不喜歡的人 合作	能挑戰自己與他人相處的能力。此外，關注工作比關注合作者本人更重要。日久，也許會發現他是一個很好相處的人。
怎樣做一個好的合作者	請你發表自己的觀點……（至少2點看法）

注意：

1．對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2．詞數150左右。

參考詞匯：合作者 partner       高效地efficiently

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Cooperate with others”.

                                                                                    

                                                                               

                                                                                      

                                                                                

                                                                                  

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

Thank you for your listening!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Cooperate with others”.

In our daily life and study, if we want to accomplish our work efficiently, we must all learn to cooperate with others. Cooperation can save us a lot of time and energy. Additionally, we can learn much from our partners by cooperating with them.

When we cooperate with someone we like, we will feel very happy. We can share our pleasure（joys）and sadness（sorrows）with him. But it challenges us to get along with others to cooperate with someone we dislike（hate）. Besides/Moreover/What’s more, we should focus on our work, instead of（rather than）our partners. Perhaps in working together with him for a long time, we’ll learn（find out）that he is a man to get along well with.

How can we become a good partner? In my opinion, we should try to listen to others. If they make mistakes, we also try to point them out. Thirdly, we mustn’t embarrass others to make them in unfavorable position.

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文屬于演講類文體，對于這類作文需要學生寫的盡量引人入勝，不可機械的翻譯，可以通過適當的設問句來引起聽眾的注意力，在寫作中注意使用平時積累的“起承轉合”的連詞，使用萬能句型造句，最后提出自己的看法。提建議時可使用firstly, secondly, finally等分開闡述，以顯得層次分明。

考點：議論文

點評：對于作文的寫作平時學習時多進行作文模板的記憶，萬能句型的積累，高中作文寫作，要注意在寫作之前，首先對題目進行認真的審清，并在腦海中回想自己積累的哪些句式、句型、單詞能用進來，這些單詞、句型都應是經典的，不會錯的。寫的過程中，多注意靈活使用定語從句，包括非限制性定語從句。要熟悉英美人寫文章的習慣，遇到專有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定語從句，強調唯一性。平時的英語作文就可以多嘗試使用這些表達，考試時才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。