Question

第二節(jié)：書面表達（滿分30分）
下面的柱狀圖（bar chart）顯示了不同年齡段孩子心理健康狀況。
根據上圖信息，請以“Psychological problems of students”為題，用英語寫一篇100~120個詞的短文。要求如下：
1. 簡要描述圖中信息；
2. 說明原因（學業(yè)壓力，缺乏引導……）；
3. 談談你的看法。
注意：文章的標題和開頭已給出（不計詞數）。
As is shown in the bar chart,                                                   

Answer 1

As is shown in the bar chart, there are more and more health problems existing among students.
It’s quite worrying that nowadays some students are not quite psychologically healthy.
　 Undoubtedly, schools should take the responsibilities of guaranteeing students’ psychological health. Relevant courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they would be more aware of the significance of psychological health and find appropriate ways to maintain and improve it. For example, there should be a psychological counseling (咨詢) hotline or office for students to turn to when they need some psychological aid.
Of course no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts from the students themselves. From my perspective, what they can do is trying to stay positive, optimistic and follow the right guidelines from their schools. To be more specific, they can participate in some activities such as voluntary work to cultivate an opening and caring mind. Meanwhile, harmful impacts from the internet should definitely be avoided.

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