Question

假設你是李華， 你的美國筆友Peter曾表示希望來中國教書。 你校現需要招聘外教， 請給他寫封信，告知招聘信息。內容主要包括：
1. 教授課程：英語口語、英語寫作、今日美國、今日英國等
2. 授課對象： 高中生（至少三年英語基礎）
3. 工作量：每周12學時，任選三門課；擔任學生英語俱樂部或英語校報顧問（advisor）
注意：
1.詞數100左右。
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3.開頭語已為你寫好。
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Peter,
　　I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experience. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students’s English club or our school’s English newspaper.
　　Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions, I’d be more than happy to help.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前必修認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態，要求讓你給筆友寫信，因此本文必須用第一人稱。再有就是不能根據材料逐字逐句的翻譯應該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。本信涉及的生詞不多，根據線索和信函要求，學生容易組織材料。適當的延展個別細節再加上所給的提示，考生注意寫清楚以下幾點：1.招聘之事，2. 教授課程，3. 授課對象，4. 工作量，5. 恰當的結尾，就能較好的發揮出來。當然在書寫上，要干凈整潔的卷面與字數要求，一般能達到較高的分數。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如be interested in，look for，teach sth to sb., take these courses，at least，work as，還運用了If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses條件狀語從句; The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experience . who引導的定語從句；I’d be more than happy to help.比較級等等。并注意了句子的銜接如： Besides；now； and 等等。