Question

10．假設你是某中學的學生李津．你校英語俱樂部將選舉新一屆副主席，你欲參選，必須寫一篇英語演講稿．
請按以下提示．

競選職位：學校英語俱樂部副主席 個人優勢：（1）性格外向、與人相處融洽 （2）善于組織各種活動 中選后決心：協助主席，服務同學 中選后設想：舉辦講座、英語晚會、英語演講比賽等活動來提高同學英語水平，激發學習興趣 表達愿望：希望同學們投票選你，相信你能干好工作

參考詞匯：副主席vice president　競選run for
[寫作要求]
1．句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫，可適當發揮．
2．詞數100左右．短文的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
Good afternoon，my dear friends，
My name is LiJin．
Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vicepresident of the English Club．Concerning this position，I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing，getting on well with others，and skilled at organizingall kinds of activities．If I am lucky enough to be the vice president，I will try my best to assistthe president and serve my fellow students．In order to improve our English and make more studentsinterested in English，I intend to organize some activities such as lectures，English parties，English speech contests andso on．I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will bea good vice president．．
Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據所提供的材料信息，寫一篇英語演講稿，準備參加校英語俱樂部將舉行的新一屆副主席．寫作要點包括：1．競選職位；2．個人優勢；3．中選后決心；4．中選后設想；5．表達愿望．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態以一般現在時和一般將來時為主．
重要短語：run for （參加…的競選），concerning sth （關于…），feel qualified for sth （有做某事的資格），get on well with （與…相處融洽），be skilled at （擅長），be lucky enough to do sth （足夠幸運去做某事），try one's best…（盡力做某事），assist sb （幫助某人），serve sb（為某人服務），in order to （為了…），be interested in（對…感興趣），intend to do sth（打算做某事），vote for（投票贊成…）．

【高分句型】
1．I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing，getting on well with others，and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities．
這里是由現在分詞getting和過去分詞或形容詞skilled作狀語，主句為I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing，主句的主語I與動詞make存在邏輯上的主動關系，某人擅長sb be skilled at sth，故用過去分詞或形容詞skilled作狀語．
2．In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English，I intend to organize some activities such as lectures，English parties，English speech contests and so on．
這里主句為I intend to organize some activities such as lectures，English parties，English speech contests and so on，"In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English"作目的狀語．

解答 Good afternoon，my dear friends，
My name is Li Jin．Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club．（競選職位）Concerning this position，I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing，getting on well with others，and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities．【高分句型】（個人優勢）If I am lucky enough to bethe vice president，I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students．（中選后決心）In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English，I intend to organize someactivities such as lectures，English parties，English speech contests and so on．【高分句型】（中選后設想） I sincerely hope you will vote for meand please believe that I will be a good vice president．（表達愿望）
Thank you．

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．