Question

6．某英語報社開展以"Parents and Children"為題的看圖作文征文活動，要求根據以下圖畫用英語寫一篇作文，文章的內容應包括：①11月15日發(fā)生在李華家的事情；②你個人的感受．請你寫一篇向報社投稿的征文．注意：1．詞數120左右，征文題目已給出，不計入總數；2．短文要求觀點明確，結構合理，緊湊連貫．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫類寫作，要求我們仔細看圖，根據題目要求寫成自己的作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第三人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時，內容要點包括：11月15日發(fā)生在李華家的事情；作者的感受．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為11月15日發(fā)生在李華家的事情．第二部分為作者的感受．
重點短語與句型：
be occupied in 忙于
prepare for  準備
How come？怎么會呢？
from the bottom of heart從心底
高分句型一：Li Hua thought to himself，feeling ashamed此句用了現在分詞feeling作伴隨狀語
高分句型二：However busy we may be，we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them，and we should return them the same selfless love from the bottom of our heart．此句用了 However引導讓步狀語從句

解答 Parents and Children
On the evening of November 15th，Li Hua was watching TV while his mother was occupied in  preparing for dinner in the kitchen．How attentive he was watching the TV program when the telephone rang．It was from his grandmother，who wanted to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to his mother．"Today is my mother's birthday？"Li Hua was a little puzzle．"How come that I have forgotten all about it？"Li Hua thought to himself，feeling ashamed．（高分句型一）（ 11月15日發(fā)生在李華家的事情）
At the story，I got deeply shocked．It is not easy for parents to bring us up．It is our parents who give us lots of love as well as much care，while we don't care for them enough．Now it's never too late to realize this and show our love and care for them．However busy we may be，we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them，and we should return them the same selfless love from the bottom of our heart．（高分句型二） （作者的感受）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．