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17．假定你是李華，你校國際部下周將在學校報告廳（auditorium）舉辦中華詩詞大會（Chinese Poetry Conference）的國際學生專場，屆時將比賽背誦古詩、回答問題、根據圖畫猜詩詞．請根據下列要點給你的美國朋友、留學生Peter寫一封信，邀請他參加．
內容要點如下：
1．比賽的時間和地點；
2．比賽的目的和形式；
3．誠摯邀請Peter參賽．
要求：1．字數100左右；2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to tell you that the international department of our school is to hold a Chinese Poetry Conference for international students next week．（高分句型一）
It is aimed to arouse foreign students interest in Chinese culture and popularize Chinese poetry．The competition consist of three sections-reciting poems，answering questions about Chinese poetry and making right guesses of the poems according to the given paintings．（高分句型二）
This is a good chance to show how much you have learned about Chinese poetry and also a good opportunity to learn more．（高分句型三）I would be looking forward to your participation with great pleasure．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假定你是李華，你校國際部下周將在學校報告廳（auditorium）舉辦中華詩詞大會（Chinese Poetry Conference）的國際學生專場，屆時將比賽背誦古詩、回答問題、根據圖畫猜詩詞．請根據下列要點給你的美國朋友、留學生Peter寫一封信，邀請他參加，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：比賽的時間和地點；比賽的目的和形式；誠摯邀請Peter參賽  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be aimed to目的是；consist of 由…組成；according to根據；look forward to盼望；
I'm glad to tell you that the international department of our school is to hold a Chinese Poetry Conference for international students next week．（高分句型一）
The competition consist of three sections-reciting poems，answering questions about Chinese poetry and making right guesses of the poems according to the given paintings．（高分句型二）
This is a good chance to show how much you have learned about Chinese poetry and also a good opportunity to learn more．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm glad to tell you that the international department of our school is to hold a Chinese Poetry Conference for international students next week．（高分句型一）
      It is aimed to arouse foreign students interest in Chinese culture and popularize Chinese poetry．The competition consist of three sections-reciting poems，answering questions about Chinese poetry and making right guesses of the poems according to the given paintings．（高分句型二）
      This is a good chance to show how much you have learned about Chinese poetry and also a good opportunity to learn more．（高分句型三）I would be looking forward to your participation with great pleasure．
                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．