Question

假如你是李華，Tracy 即將結束你們學校作為交換生的學習生活并返回英國。請你根據以下內容用英語寫一篇歡送詞。

1.       贊揚她的善良友好；

2.       懷念與她相處的快樂時光；

3.       感謝她對大家英語學習的幫助；

4.       希望她有機會再來中國。

注意：1.詞數不少于100詞；      2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭與結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

Dear teachers and friends, I’d like to say something before Tracy goes back to England.

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That’s all. Thank you.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear teachers and friends, I’d like to say something before Tracy goes back to England.

On one hand, Tracy is such a kind and friendly girl that I feel happy to be her friend. Because of her good character she is very popular with us during her stay here. On the other hand, she gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with her. How can we forget the time that we spent together happily! I remember she doesn’t hesitate to help us whenever we have trouble in learning English. Therefore, we are grateful to Tracy from the bottom of our heart and we owe a lot of thanks to her.

True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with Tracy. I also hope that Tracy can come back to China and stay with us in the near future.

【解析】

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。