Question

寫作

     We all have weaknesses and strengths -no matter who we are.Sometimes the weaknesses seem to
outweigh the strengths and sometimes it's the other way around.Some people get sick easily.Some struggle to manage their finances properly.Some people are hopeless communicators and struggle with
relationships.Many people leave it and accept it as just bad luck-but not everyone.Some people facing
huge limitations still manage to achieve.They rise above their weaknesses and do not allow them to limit
their possibilities.I attended a school prizegiving ceremony not so long ago and the guest speaker was
Andrew,who was a blind man as a child.Instead of allowing this to limit him,he chose to work hard to overcome it.When he was 10,he became deaf.He is now the Principal Youth Court Judge for New Zealand.
Not only did he become successful,but he did so in a profession where he had to speak in front of others
regularly.
       【寫作內(nèi)容】
        學(xué)校最近組織了一次學(xué)生交流活動,你參加討論,就所給材料準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿,題目是
"Don't allow your weaknesses to limit you",內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:
        1．用約30個(gè)字概括Andrew的身體缺陷及他取得的成績；
        2．?dāng)⑹鲆粋�(gè)你身邊真實(shí)或虛構(gòu)的事例,說明只要克服自身缺點(diǎn),就能取得成功這樣一
個(gè)道理；
       3．談?wù)勀愕目捶?
      【寫作要求】
       1．在作文中可以使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不
得直接引用原文中的句子；
       2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱.
      【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫.
      【思路導(dǎo)航】 寫作要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括:Andrew身上的缺陷(blind和deaf)和他取得的成績；身邊的事例；得到的啟示；你的看法.

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Answer 1

                                        Don't allow your weaknesses to limit you
     Andrew became blind and deaf when he was young.But later he became successful and often gave a
talk in front of others.
     I learned a lot from Andrew.He was an example that we should follow.Jackey,a classmate of mine,
has some difficulty in walking.But he never looks down upon himself.He goes to school every day even
though it is not easy for him.He always tries every means to overcome the difficulties and often answers the teachers' questions like the other students.By his hard work,Jackey often wins the teachers' praise,which
makes us admire him.
     As young students without any disability,I think that we should take every chance to enlarge our
knowledge.The weaknesses which limit us are our enemies.In my opinion,from now on,no matter what the trouble is,we will always try to find a way to overcome it.We should face all kinds of challenges bravely
and try to make achievements.
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