Question

【題目】請閱讀下面有關學生自理能力的漫畫及相關文字，并按要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Many students rely too much on their parents about daily issues.

(Friday afternoon. On the phone.)

Son: Mum?

Mother: Yes?

Son: All of my socks are dirty. What shall I do?

Mother: No worry! I’ll help you this weekend.

Son: ...

【寫作內容】

1.用約30詞概括漫畫的主要內容；

2.分析學生自理能力差的原因，并談談你的看法（上述對話僅供參考，原因不少于兩點)；

3.談談如何增強學生的自理能力。

【寫作要求】

1.可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2.作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

【評分標準】

概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】As is vividly shown in the picture, a delivery containing dirty clothes is sent to a mother from her son, which reveals students’ poor ability to take care of themselves. (30 words)

Personally, these students, along with their parents, should take the blame for their inability to attend to themselves. For one thing, some students take everything in their life for granted, thinking it’s their parents’ duty to feed them, clothe them and even clean their messes. That is why they don’t bother to learn some basic living skills. For another, the indulgence of parents encourages the laziness of these students. Some parents even go to extremes to mirco-control every little detail of their children. They somewhat discourage their children from trying to live their life independently.

Therefore, to help them become independent and capable, parents should loose control on their children, while children should learn to take more responsibilities for themselves. (120 words)

【解析】試題分析：

本文要求根據漫畫和文字內容寫一篇關于一些學生自理能力差的文章。成文時應注意以下幾點：(1)內容要點齊全。(2)人稱使用要恰當。(3)時態：一般現在時為主。(4)適當使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。根據題目的要求和我們上面提到的注意點，列出提綱：第一部分：介紹漫畫內容（注意詞數限制在30個單詞之內）；第二段：分析學生自理能力差的原因，并談談你的看法（用personally, for one thing，for another ，therefore等使這部分流暢，注意這部分的兩方面內容：分析原因，談談自己的看法）；第三段：如何增強學生的自理能力（父母和孩子雙方面努力）。

【亮點說明】

1.使用高級句型：定語從句的使用As is vividly shown in the picture, a delivery containing dirty clothes is sent to a mother from her son, which reveals students’ poor ability to take care of themselves.；現在分詞作伴隨狀語For one thing, some students take everything in their life for granted, thinking it’s their parents’ duty to feed them, clothe them and even clean their messes.；表語從句的使用That is why they don’t bother to learn some basic living skills.等等。2.使用了過渡詞語：Personally, For one thing，For another等。3.使用了重要短語：along with 以及；take…for granted認為…理所當然；take responsibilities負責，承擔責任。