Question

最近，某中學生英文報開設了“After-class activities”的欄目。請你根據以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學們積極參加課外活動。

1. 你參加的課外活動及給你帶來的好處。（社團活動；體育運動；上網…）

2. 為同學選擇課外活動提出建議。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右。

2. 稿件的開頭以為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

3. 注釋：社團--- club

After-school activities

Nowadays, after- school activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.

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Answer 1

【答案】

After-school activities

Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much.

In my spare time, doing sports and surfing the Internet are my favorite, which do me a lot of good. Besides building up my body and enriching / increasing my knowledge (broadening my minds / horizons), they also relax me after a long day of hard work. In addition, I take an active part in school club activities, in which I not only develop my organizing skills but also learn how to deal with people.

Here I have some suggestions. As students, you’d better choose after-school activities that interest you and suit you. It’s also very important for you to balance well between studies and activities.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文，話題是After-class activities，和學生的生活密切相關，要點都已經給出，1. 你參加的課外活動及給你帶來的好處。（社團活動；體育運動；上網…）

2. 為同學選擇課外活動提出建議。具體內容還要考生自己發揮，審題時注意本文使用一般現在時，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調句型準確表述。如范文的句子：doing sports and surfing the Internet are my favorite, which do me a lot of good. 和I take an active part in school club activities, in which I not only develop my organizing skills but also learn how to deal with people. 還要適當的關聯詞把文章連貫起來：如：besides，in addition等。

考點：考查提綱類短文寫作。

點評：提綱類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。