Question

書面表達（滿分30分）
假設你叫楊名，今年報名參加了某大學自主招生。這所大學要求考生用英語寫一封申請信，請按下面提示寫一封英語申請信。內容應包括：
個人情況：性別、年齡、現就讀學校（保定先鋒中學）
個人條件：各門功課都不錯，尤其擅長英語（曾獲得全國中學生英語口語大賽一等獎）。
申請此大學原因：名氣大，校園環境優美
注意：1. 詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好。
2. 可適當增加細節，以行文連貫。
3. 生詞；申請—apply(v. ),application(n. )
Dear Dean,
My name is Yang Ming. I’ve learned that your university will admit students in advance…
Yours Truly,
Yang Ming.

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Dean,
My name is Yang Ming. I’ve learned that your university will admit students in advance。With a great longing to enter your school ，I’d like to make this application。
I’m a boy of 18 at baoding xianfeng high school 。I do well in every subject especially in English 。I ever won the first prize in the National English spoken contest for the high school students。Deeply interested in your school ，which enjoys a high reputation and beautiful campus ，I’m writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in your university 。if you could give me a chance I will be very grateful。
Looking forward to your early reply。
Yours Truly,
Yang Ming.

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