Question

假設你是2013年“希望英語”競賽的參賽選手，組委會以“健康”為題命題演講。以下是演講要點：健康對我們任何人來說都是最為重要的。

首先，注意你的飲食。我們應該吃大量的水果和蔬菜……

其次，鍛煉是必需的……

最后，養成良好的生活習慣……

注意：1.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；  2.詞數：120左右； 3.文章開頭已給出；不計入總詞數

Health is the most important for any of us.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Health is the most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge. Firstly, pay attention to the diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in fiber and low in fat. As a proverb says, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” So fruit is good for health. Don’t have a lot of food that contains too much fat, such as butter. Meanwhile , sweets should be eaten in proper quantity, because too much sugar does harm to us. Don’t drink too much coffee, either.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。假設你是2013年“希望英語”競賽的參賽選手，組委會以“健康”為題命題演講。以下是演講要點：健康對我們任何人來說都是最為重要的。首先，注意你的飲食。我們應該吃大量的水果和蔬菜……其次，鍛煉是必需的……最后，養成良好的生活習慣……需要寫的內容已經粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點說明】As a proverb says, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”這句諺語用的恰到好處。Don’t have a lot of food that contains too much fat, such as butter.這個句子中包含一個定語從句。

考點：話題類書面表達