Question

假設你是張華，是某中學的高三寄宿生。面對目前的學習壓力，想和家中的父母交流，感謝他們對你的愛與鼓勵，告訴他們你的學習、思想近況及考前打算。請你用英文寫封短信發到你父母的QQ郵箱上。

注意：

1. 詞數120左右。開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

2. 文中不能出現任何與考生有關的具體信息。

Dear Mom and Dad,

With the college entrance examination drawing near, how I wish I could have a face-to-face conversation with you, but

Your loving son，

Zhang Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Mom and Dad,

With the college entrance examination drawing near, how I wish I could have a face-to-face conversation with you, but I have been busy preparing for the coming exam, so what I can do is to tell you something about myself in the email.

Thanks to your frequent encouragement and unselfish love, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies. It will be only two months before I take the exam, about which I’m feeling greatly stressed. So I need your continuous support and better understanding.

I have made a detailed study schedule for the coming exam, which I have been carrying out as planned. Believe in me and I can manage to deal with the problems both in my study and in my life. I’m confident of achieving success in the exam and you will be proud of me.

Take care of yourselves.

Your loving son，

Zhang Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，內容很容易把握。考生在寫作之前必修認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態，要求是學生和父母交流近期的學習情況，心里狀態及考前打算，所以要用一般現在時，必須用第一人稱。材料只是一個提綱，告訴你寫出哪方面的內容，具體內容必須自己把握。

【亮點說明】文中兩次使用現在完成進行時have been doing突出了一直在為考生做準備 ,一直在進步。還運用重點句型：what 名詞性從句，it will be ……before……句型，which 引導的非限制性定語從句，為文章增色不少，并注意了句子的銜接如：,so

考點：提綱作文。