Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高一學生李華。你的英國筆友Peter來信詢問你高一學校生活的情況。請你給他回信，內容包括：

1.你的學校生活；

2.你的感受；

3.詢問他的情況。

注意：1.詞數不少于50；

2.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m very pleased to tell you how I get along with my high school as you want to learn about it. It is going really well.

Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, my school is an ideal place to get us the all-round development. Apart from the excellent teachers, the public transportation is also convenient. Our school life is busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school that we all enjoy taking part in. I have made many new friends and we often help and learn from each other.

What about you? May your school life be filled with achievements and happiness.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據提示可知，本篇為一封書信：假設你是紅星中學高一學生李華。你的英國筆友Peter來信詢問你高一學校生活的情況。請你給他回信，內容包括：1.你的學校生活；2.你的感受；3.詢問他的情況。

第2步：根據寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：pleased to tell you（高興地告訴你）；going really well（真的變好）；Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood（位于一個美麗而安靜的社區）；Apart from the excellent teachers（除了一些優秀的老師之外）；等。

第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。