Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

    增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào) (∧), 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

    刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線 ( \ ) 劃掉。

    修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

    注意: 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

    By the end of last month, I attended a celebration meeting hold in our school. At the meeting, 25 advanced teachers were praised and those had completed 30 years of teaching were given medals. Mr. Yang was among one of those praised. After the meeting, our classmates and I went to see him.          Seeing us, the grey-haired teacher looked exciting. When some of us said we wanted to be teachers and devote ourselves to education in the future, he nodded with satisfactions. He said in a very firmly voice, “Teach is a noble job. Man would be very stupid without education.” We all agreed and greatly encouraged by his words.

Answer 1

By the end of last month, I attended a celebration meeting hold in our school. At the meeting, 25

At                                             held

teachers were praised and those∧ had completed 30 years of teaching were given medals. Mr.

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Yang was among one of those praised. After the meeting, our classmates and I went to see him.

        去掉                                  my

Seeing us, the grey-haired teacher looked exciting. When some of us said we wanted to be teachers

                                  excited

and devote ourselves to education in the future, he nodded with satisfactions. He said in very a firmly

                                                   satisfactions               firm                     

voice, “ Teach is a noble job. Man would be very stupid without education.” We all agreed and

       Teaching

∧greatly encouraged by his words.

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