Question

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
在一個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中，總會(huì)有許多事發(fā)生。請(qǐng)寫一件在你的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中對(duì)你的成長(zhǎng)有幫助的一件事。

Answer 1

As we grow up, there are many things happening to us, which have great impact on our future in life.
When I was in the middle school, I didn’t do well in my English. It was my English teacher who instrusted me in English study. Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to my teacher. He has taken good care of my studies since I came to this  school..When  in trouble, I often turned to him for help .He always encouraged me and gived me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. He cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English.
With the assistance of my teacher, I've made great progress in English. I'm so thankful for his love that I'll work harder and wish to be an English teacher in the future.

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文。開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】As we grow up, there are many things happening to us, which have great impact on our future in life.這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， It was my English teacher who instrusted me in English study.這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句， Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to my teacher.這句話用了高級(jí)詞匯fail， When  in trouble, I often turned to him for help . 這句話用了省略句， With the assistance of my teacher,  I've made great progress in English. I'm so thankful for his love that I'll work harder and wish to be an English teacher in the future.這句話用了so…that…句型。