Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)（每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(/)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

This term our school has offer more than ten optional courses from which students can choose from. The courses are given from 4:00 to 5:30 every Thursday afternoon. Students show interest in optional courses. Their favorite are computers, speaking English, arts and so on. They say they have learned a lot about that is not taught in text books and they have got a great deal of practice. Therefore, students are not quite satisfied. They hope that more optional courses will be offered or the homework will be less. They suggest more trips and visits should organized so that they can learn more about what’s going on inside school.

Answer 1

【答案】

This term our school has more than ten optional courses from which students can choose . The courses are given from 4:00 to 5:30 every Thursday afternoon. Students show interest in optional courses. Their are computers, English, arts and so on. They say they have learned a lot about is not taught in text books and they have got a great deal of practice. , students are not quite satisfied. They hope that more optional courses will be offered the homework will be less. They suggest more trips and visits should organized so that they can learn more about what’s going on school.

【解析】

第一處：offer→offered 現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)由＂have/has+過(guò)去分詞＂構(gòu)成。

第二處：刪除choose后的from 固定搭配choose from意為＂從……中選擇＂，＂介詞+關(guān)系代詞＂引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，介詞from已有，故刪除后面的from。

第三處：在every前加on 表示在具體的某一天的上午、下午用介詞on。

第四處：favorite→favorites favorite表示＂最喜愛(ài)的事＂時(shí)是可數(shù)名詞，此處需用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

第五處：speaking→spoken ＂英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)＂應(yīng)為spoken English。

第六處：that→what what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，并作從句的主語(yǔ)，表示＂什么＂。

第七處：Therefore→However 此處上下文之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故應(yīng)用However連接。

第八處：or→and 此處意為＂他們希望能夠提供更多的選修課程，并布置更少的家庭作業(yè)＂。前后兩個(gè)分句是并列關(guān)系，此處表示順承，應(yīng)用and。

第九處：在organized前加be trips and visits與organize是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。

第十處：inside→outside 根據(jù)常識(shí)判斷，trips and visits是在校外舉辦的活動(dòng)。