Question

【題目】看圖寫作：假設你是XX中學高一學生李華，下面四幅圖描述了上周日你放學回家的經歷。請根據圖片的先后順序，將這件事以日記形式記述下來，并適當表達自己的感受。

注意：

1．日記的開頭已寫好。

2．詞數120字左右。

提示詞：煙斗 pipe 桶 bucket

April 5th, 2015 Sunday Cloudy __________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

There was an old house on my way from school to home. Last Sunday, I happened to see some smoke coming out of its window when I passed by. There was no doubt that the house was on fire. I was so worried that I took immediate actions to solve the problem. I found a bucket far away from the house and carried some water with it. Luckily, the fire did not grow bigger. So I put out the fire with the water at once.

To my great surprise, an old man, who seemed to get wet because of the water, appeared behind the window. He shouted at me angrily with a wet pipe in his hand. At that moment, it suddenly occurred to me that the smoke was from his pipe. As soon as I realized what had happened, I ran away from the old house immediately.

【解析】

試題分析：考查看圖作文。寫好看圖作文需要注意以下幾個方面：1、認真觀察，理解圖畫；2、要發揮聯想和想象力。在此基礎上，確定文章的人稱和時態，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將文章完整地表述出來。同時應選用準確的語言和恰當的連接詞與過渡詞。這篇文章要求以日記的形式展開，故注意時態為一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱。

【亮點說明】本文使用了多種句型，使結構更加合理，表達更加到位。如定語從句：To my great surprise, an old man, who seemed to get wet because of the water, appeared behind the window.，再如名詞性從句：As soon as I realized what had happened, I ran away from the old house immediately.。除此之外，還使用了許多的短語，如：happen to do、pass by、take immediate action to、put out the fire等。