Question

【題目】書面表達。

假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華。你班同學參加了學校的“地球日”系列活動。請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動的全過程。

注意：詞數不少于60。

提示詞：地球日Earth Day

Answer 1

【答案】

Actions for a Greener Earth

A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.

Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.

We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求按照四幅圖的先后順序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動的全過程。詞數不少于60詞，參考詞匯必須使用。使用一般過去時和第一人稱進行寫作。

亮點說明：范文使用了非謂語動詞calling upon us to join in the actions和so...that句型與賓語從句we can do more for a better world等，句式多樣；還使用了固定詞組call sb to do sth, join in, come up with. Make use of, turn...into, give away, be proud of等，使作文內容變得豐富。