Question

10．據調查顯示，目前許多中學生不重視課外閱讀．請你根據下表內容寫一篇短文，對這一現狀進行分析并提出建議．
要點：

Reasons for not reading	1．too much homework 2．no habit of reading 3．spend time on TV or the Internet
Advantages of reading	1．learn more about the world 2．think better 3．make our life more colorful …
Advice to teachers or students	…（至少一點）

注意：1．不少于60詞（開頭已給出的內容不記入總詞數）；
2．內容必須包括上表中的要點，可適當發揮；
3．條理清楚、語句連貫；
4．文中不得出現真實的地名、校名和人名．
At present only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons．
First of all，quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework．Still others haven't formed a habit of reading．They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet．However，reading has many benefits．Through reading we can learn more about the world．Besides，it can help us think better．Last but not least，reading can make our life more colourful．
Here are my suggestions．For one thing，teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read．For another，it's a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容是對許多中學生不重視課外閱讀這一現狀進行分析并提出建議．時態主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
一、不重視課外閱讀的原因1．作業太多2．沒有讀書習慣3．時間花在電視或網絡上
二、課外閱讀的好處：1．更多地了解世界2．學會如何更好思考3．生活更加豐富多彩
三、對學校或同學的建議（至少一點）
常用到的重點短語：
first of all首先
form a habit of…養成…習慣
would rather do sth寧愿做某事
besides另外
last but not least最后也是最重要的
make sb/sth+adj 讓…怎么樣
For one thing…For another…一方面…另一方面…
【高分句型】
1．①Last but not least，②reading can ③make our life more colourful．
①last but not least最后也是最重要的
②reading動名詞作主語
③make sth+adj 讓…怎么樣
2．①For one thing，teachers ②are supposed to limit the amount of our homework ③so that we can have more time ④to read．
①For one thing…For another…一方面…另一方面…
②be supposed to do sth 應該做某事
③so that引導的目的狀語從句，也可以用in order that．
④動詞不定式作為目的狀語．

解答 At present only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons．At present only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons．
First of all，quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework．Still others haven't formed a habit of reading．They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet．（不重視課外閱讀的原因）
However，reading has many benefits．Through reading we can learn more about the world．Besides，it can help us think better．Last but not least，reading can make our life more colourful．【高分句型】（課外閱讀的好處）
  Here are my suggestions．For one thing，teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read．【高分句型】For another，it's a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other．（對學校或同學的建議）

點評 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡潔明了，寫作時也容易區分表達，本題在寫作時，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時要根據提示有效靈活的構思，恰當使用邏輯詞語，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．