Question

9．在初中的三年里，你參加過各種不同形式的社團活動．有的活動給你留下了深刻的印象．請你以"           leaves me a deep impression"為標題，寫一篇文章，描述你印象最深刻的一次活動以及你的收獲．
要求：
1．語言表達準確，短文連貫通順．標題中橫線上需填上相應的活動名稱．
2．詞數80詞左右，文中不能出現能透露考生真實身份的任何信息．
         leaves me a deep impression
                  ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
With his help，I fixed one and succeeded in flying．
with one's help 在某人的幫助下；succeed in doing sth 成功做某事．這句話意為：在他的幫助下，我安裝好了一個，并成功放飛．
高分句型二：
By making model planes I learn that no matter what I do，I must keep doing it even though it fails again and again．
no matter  無論； keep doing sth 一直做某事；even though 即使．這句話意為：通過制作飛機模型我認識到，無論做什么，我必須一直努力，即使一次又一次地失敗．

解答 Making model planes  leaves me a deep impression
      I have taken part in many outdoor activities during the past three years．Some of them have left me deep impression，especially making plane models．（開篇點題）
      One day，Mr．Ma told us to Room 202 to make model planes．After class，I went there and took the parts of a model plane to fix it．Soon I made one，unluckily it couldn't fly．I was a little worried and tried another time，it failed again，I was very sad．Just at that time，a student came to me and told me the skills of fixing．With his help，I fixed one and succeeded in flying．【高分句型一】（描述事件）
     By making model planes I learn that no matter what I do，I must keep doing it even though it fails again and again．【高分句型二】Besides it is important for members to help each other．（我的收獲）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．