Question

書面表達

提示：你的加拿大朋友Danny,也是一位中學生，他希望了解你將如何度過這個暑假。為此，你把你的想法寫成短文，然后再發e-mail 給他。暑假生活包括以下內容：

1.堅持鍛煉身體；2.根據個人興趣和需要安排學習；3.幫助家人做家務。

要求：1.暑假生活除必須寫以上3項內容外，其他活動（1~2項）可適當發揮。2.詞數：100左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Summer holiday is coming at once.During the holiday,the first thing I’ll do is to get relaxed after the examinations to enter the senior middle school.I’ll go on doing morning exercises every day.In the afternoon I’ll go fishing in the river if I’m free.I like playing the computer a lot.So I’m going to surf the Internet and try to find some useful information.I like reading.So I’d like to spend some time reading books.My Chinese is a little weak.So I’m going to read more books on Chinese than on any other subjects.On the other hand I’ll help my parents do some housework as much as possible.I’d like to visit some of my friends and relatives as well.

I’m sure I will have a good time this summer.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，作者在寫作中運用將來時態，敘述了即將到來暑假里的計劃和打算，暑假生活安排的豐富多彩，除了要求必須寫的之外，還是當發揮，使得文章內容更加充實，生動，語句流暢，通順，符合邏輯。