Question

假如你是九年級學生李華，給美國的筆友David寫一封80字左右的信，介紹你校畢業班的學習情況。內容要點如下：

還有一個月要畢業了，同學們都致力于刻苦學習各門功課。

老師對學生既友好又嚴格要求，一些學生因考試而壓力大。

青少年輔導員建議我們要勞逸結合，不要熬夜。

老師鼓勵我們使用橙色，因為它能帶來成功和使人振奮。

我覺得對學生來說適當放松自己是必要的，比如………

注意：1.文章必須包含所有要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫。

      2.第5點作適當發揮。

      3.信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總字數。

Dear David

     How are you? I am going to leave school in a month.                              

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                 

                                                                                

                                                                                

Can you offer me some advice ? I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

LiHua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear David

     How are you? I am going to leave school in a month.，so all the students are busy studying hard sons. Our teachers are very strict with us and very kind to us as well. Some of us are almost stressed out because of the coming examination. The Youngth Counsellor advises us to combine work with rest and not to stay up late.  Our teachers encourage us to use orange because it can bring us success and cheer us up. In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to relax ourselves properly, such as taking a walk after supper, playing basketball sometimes and so on.

Can you offer me some advice? I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹畢業班學習情況的文章。題目中給出的材料較為詳細，動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子時態，關鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，可以適當發揮。

【亮點說明】這篇文章使用了一些固定句型和短語如encourage sb to do sth，it is necessary for us students to relax ourselves properly等等，這些都為文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。