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書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

長汀縣因在推進(jìn)城鄉(xiāng)綠化、治理水土流失方面取得了顯著成績，榮獲“全國生態(tài)文明建設(shè)和現(xiàn)代林業(yè)建設(shè)示范縣”稱號(hào)。但我們還仍需發(fā)揚(yáng)“滴水穿石、人一我十”的精神，努力實(shí)現(xiàn)“百姓富”與“生態(tài)美”的有機(jī)統(tǒng)一。學(xué)校為此開展了以“How to Protect Our Environment”為主題的演講比賽。

內(nèi)容要求：

1.列舉2-3個(gè)有關(guān)破壞環(huán)境的現(xiàn)象。

2. 提出至少兩點(diǎn)保護(hù)環(huán)境的建議。

詞數(shù)80左右，標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞（可選用）：

destroy, plastic, blue, dirty, fish, ride, throw, pour, waste, recycle

How to Protect Our Environment

Changting is becoming more and more beautiful.The environment is becoming better , but

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How to Protect Our Environment

Changting is becoming more and more beautiful.The environment is becoming better , but there are still some people destroying it. The sky is not so blue . There is no fish in some dirty rivers . Even worse, a lot of people can’t drink clean water. It’s time for us to do something to protect the environment. As a student, we should ride a bike or walk to school every day. We had better take a cloth bag instead of using plastic bags when we go shopping.We ought to stop factories pouring waste water into rivers. And we can recycle cans and bottles. If everyone does their best to protect the environment, it will get cleaner and tidier soon.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓小作者寫出就“怎樣保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境”自己的觀點(diǎn)。小作者把要求寫的幾點(diǎn)都表述得很清晰。另外，寫作時(shí)，小作者還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。小作者寫的這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如It’s time for us to do something to protect the environment. We had better take a cloth bag instead of using plastic bags when we go shopping.We ought to stop factories pouring waste water into rivers.有一些好的固定短語還有連詞。

考點(diǎn)：考查命題類作文。