Question

17．為弘揚感恩這一中華傳統美德，你校英語社團決定舉辦以"Be grateful tomy English teacher"為題的征文活動．請參考以下提示，結合你的經歷和感受，寫一篇英語征文稿．
提示：

參考詞匯：grateful 感激的，encourage，support
要求：1．將題目補充完整；
2．文中不得出現真實的人名、校名和地名；
3．詞數80左右．
Be grateful tomy English teacher
I really want to express thanks to my English teacher，Miss Wang!
She's so smart and fair and friendly．She's got big eyes and long dark hair．I enjoy her each lesson every day．
With her kindness，she gets my attention．Every day she's planting a seed，helping all of us．I still remember the day when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at．Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries．
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future．I'll write a poem for her to show all my thanks．I'll let everyone know she's great and I'm grateful to have her as my teacher．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I still remember the day①when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates②because I was shy and③afraid to be laughed at．我仍然記得我英語分數低的那天，我將自己藏起來沒因為我害羞害怕被嘲笑．
①when作為關系詞的定語從句，修飾前面的the day．
②because引導的原因狀語從句．
③be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事．
【高分句型二】
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future．她是一名老師，像春天一樣，鼓勵我帶領我走向美好的未來．
who作為關系詞的定語從句，修飾前面的teacher

解答 Be grateful to my English teacher
I really want to express thanks to my English teacher，Miss Wang!（感謝誰）
She's so smart and fair and friendly．She's got big eyes and long dark hair．（形象）I enjoy her each lesson every day．
With her kindness，she gets my attention．Every day she's planting a seed，helping all of us．I still remember the day  when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at．【高分句型一】Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries．（如何幫助我的，為什么要感謝）
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future【高分句型二】．I'll write a poem for her to show all my thanks．I'll let everyone know she's great and I'm grateful to have her as my teacher．（感受和如何表示謝意）

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．