Question

12．在我們成長(zhǎng)的道路，朋友是不可或缺的那道風(fēng)景．在相知相伴的歲月里，留下了多少美好的故事和難忘的回憶!某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社以"A Story Between My Friend and Me"為題開(kāi)展征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你按要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章參賽．
要求：
故事必須原創(chuàng)；
80-120詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱．
參考要點(diǎn)：
分享故事（起因，經(jīng)過(guò)，結(jié)果…）；
表達(dá)感受（幸福，感動(dòng)，思考…）；
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A Story Between My Friend and Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life，especially the story between my friend and me．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study．所以我不得不在醫(yī)院呆了一個(gè)月，我擔(dān)心我的學(xué)習(xí)．這里have to do sth表示不得不做某事；be worried about表示擔(dān)心…
②When he knew about that，he said he could help me with my study．當(dāng)他知道這一點(diǎn)時(shí)，他說(shuō)他可以幫助我學(xué)習(xí)．這里when引導(dǎo)一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；said后面跟一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，主句是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，從句也應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)形式；help sb with sth表示幫助某人做某事．

解答 There is always something unforgettable in my life，especially the story between my friend and me．One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me．（引出話題）
Here is the story．On a rainy day，I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly．My left leg was broken．So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study（高分句型）．Then my friend Mingming came to see me．When he knew about that，he said he could help me with my study（高分句型）．On hearing this，I didn't feel worried any more．From that day on，he taught me every day．（重點(diǎn)介紹故事所發(fā)生的時(shí)間及經(jīng)過(guò)）I was so moved．I didn't fall behind the other students with Mingming's help．I thanked him a lot．（我的感受）
In my opinion，friends are very important in our life．No matter what happens，true friends will always be friends．（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫(xiě)對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．