Question

7．長大意味著什么？是關心、幫助銅須也？是體貼、理解父母？是感恩、匯報親朋師長？還是…請以I am not a child any longer為題，記敘你在學習生活中經歷的一件或兩件事，表達你對長大的理解．
要求：
1.80次左右；
2．語言流暢，書寫規范，卷面整潔；
穩重不得使用真實姓名．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital．（高分句型）
本句是一個主從復合句，know后加的賓語從句，其中not…until直達…才，引導的時間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
They both said the meal was very delicious，although it tasted salty．（高分句型）
although引導的讓步狀語從句，表示雖然，其中主句還是一個含有賓語從句the meal was very delicious的復合句

解答 I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years．I used to be weak and short．But now，I am strong and as tall as my father．The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others．（我的改變）
 It was a Wednesday evening．When I went back home，no one was in．So I cooked the meal．I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital．【高分句型一】They both said the meal was very delicious，although it tasted salty．【高分句型二】At bedtime，I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet．My mother said，"Dear，you have really grown up．"（經歷的一件事）
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more．

點評 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領悟，考生在審題上一般不會出現障礙．可根據內容要點提示運用相關的句型結構靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．