Question

16．現(xiàn)在，很多中學(xué)生被近視困擾，請(qǐng)就此現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />內(nèi)容包括：1．造成近視的原因；
2．近視對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)或生活的影響；
3．你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)視力？（至少兩條建議）
要求：1．字?jǐn)?shù)80-100字．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與人名．
參考詞匯：eyesight   n．視力              nearsighted  adj．近視的
have good eyesight   視力好      have bad eyesight  視力差
Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now
                          

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)劕F(xiàn)在中學(xué)生近視的原因和怎樣保護(hù)視力．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第二、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．造成近視的原因；
2．近視對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)或生活的影響；
3．你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)視力？（至少兩條建議）
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
have good eyesight   視力好
have bad eyesight  視力差
had better do sth 最好做某事
take breaks休息
be supposed to do sth 應(yīng)該做某事
【高分句型】
1．So it’s important to protect your eyes．
it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．

2．Second，①you’d better take breaks②after reading or doing homework for a long time
①had better do sth 最好做某事
②after reading or doing homework 是一個(gè)省略句，完整表達(dá)是after you read or do homework．

解答 Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now．There are many reasons．Some students often play computer Games for long．Some keep their eyes too close to the books while reading and some often read in poor light．（造成近視的原因）                                                                                             
    If we are nearsighted，you may lose some good chances for your dream jobs like pilots and policemen．（近視對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)或生活的影響）So it’s important to protect your eyes．【高分句型】First，you shouldn’t play computer games or watch TV too much．Second，you’d better take breaks after reading or doing homework for a long time【高分句型】．Third，you’re supposed to do eye exercises regularly．（如何保護(hù)視力）If you can do like this，you will have a good eyesight!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出．寫作時(shí)先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，要結(jié)合活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)．