Question

針對下面的話題，結(jié)合自己的實際情況，寫一篇短文。
Do you have a healthy lifestyle? What is your healthy lifestyle?
要求： 1. 敘述清楚，有條理性； 2. 語句通順、自然；語法正確，使用多種句式； 3. 詞數(shù)在70左右。

Answer 1

I have a healthy lifestyle and I think this is very important. I like to eat healthy food every day. I often eat bread, noodles, porridge and rice. They help children grow. I like fruit and vegetables because they help us keep in good health. I don’t eat too much meat because it will make me fat. I also do sports every day, so I always feel happy and work harder after sports. Running is good exercise. I often go running in the morning. That makes me feel like eating breakfast. Usually, I play football in the afternoon.

解析試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，寫一寫自己打算。由于在要點中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。根據(jù)要求可知本句主要是一般現(xiàn)在及過去時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。
考點：命題作文的寫作
點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。