Question

初中階段的學習和生活即將結束，你的老師陪伴你度過了三年的校園生活。回顧其中的許多點點滴滴，久久不能忘記。請你用英文給你的某一位教師寫封信，和他(她)說說感激的心里話。
要點提示：

教師表現	1．工作努力，認真； 2．教學耐心，待人友好。
留存記憶	1．嚴格要求也關愛學生； 2．師生相處和睦； 3．給予學習上和生活上的幫助; ……

要求：1．內容包括所有提示要點，意思完整，語言規范。
2．可適當發揮，增加細節，使語句連貫通暢。
3．文中不要出現你的真實姓名和學校。
4．80－100詞左右，信的首尾巴寫好．不計入總詞數。
Dear my teacher,
Leaving you-lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.
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Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.                                        
Thank you again for what you've done for us! All the best to you!
Yours,
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Answer 1

Dear my teacher,
Leaving you－lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.
Since you became my English teacher three years ago, you’ve always been working hard. I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. You’re strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave.
Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.
Yours,
XXXX

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者主要寫三年的校園生活的回憶，全文所用時態有一般現在時態、一般過去時態，一般將來時態，還有現在完成時態。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如from my heart ，be strict with,take care of ,get on well with ,each other等短語，文中還用到了時間狀語從句 when I failed in an exam, When I had trouble in life,Since you became my English teacher three years ago, ；賓語從句 I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are.， All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years；感嘆句 how interesting your lessons are，how friendly you are.多種時態運用自如，例如現在完成進行時you’ve always been working hard，一般將來時I won't forget，一般過去時when I failed in an exam.文章層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。