Question

俗話說“失去了才懂得珍惜”。三年過去了，我們即將畢業。你是否有一些讓你感到遺憾或后悔的事情？如果再給你一次機會的話…… 請你以“Give Me Another Chance”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，告訴我們你的想法。開頭已給出，不計入單詞總數。
溫馨提示: 短文中請勿使用真實姓名、地點或所在學校名稱。
Give Me Another Chance
How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.

Answer 1

Give Me Another Chance
How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.
Now, I am leaving our school. I want to enter a good school, but I am weak in English. I’m afraid I can’t succeed. I regret that I haven’t learned English well in the past three years. I missed many chances though my teacher encouraged me.
As the saying goes, “It’s never too late to learn”. If I have another chance, I should try my best to learn it well. I will practice listening, reading, speaking and writing as much as I can. I will preview lessons before class, listen carefully in class and finish my homework on time. I will ask my teacher for help if I have trouble. I believe I will cherish this chance and do it better.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態主要詞匯等問題，根據內容可知本文主要是過去時態和將來時態，注意時態和時間狀語的搭配，注意條件從句的應用。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。
點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內容發揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。