Question

書面表達（15分）

伸出你的手，讓我們幫助貧困地區的學生，使之能渡過難關。請你以Tom的身份寫一份英語倡議書，號召同學們多想辦法，奉獻愛心。至少寫出兩種以上的幫助方式以及如此做的目的和意義。字數80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總次數。

1.捐錢捐物（目的用途）；2.做兼職工作：收廢品，發廣告，賣報紙，修自行車，打掃衛生來掙錢；3.交筆友，常寫信幫助他們學業上，思想上，心理上的問題。

Dear classmates,

We are so lucky that we can sit in the bright classroom to study happily ,but there are many children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly .We should do something to help them .______________________________________________

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The more we do ,the better our world will be !

Yours，

Tom

 

Answer 1

Dear classmates,

We are so lucky that we can sit in the bright classroom to study happily, but there are many children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. We should do something to help them. First of all, we can donate some money as we can which can help the students buy some books and food for their study and life. If we don’t have enough money, we may do a part-time job to earn money. Such as collecting waste products, sending advertisement, selling papers, repairing bicycles and so on. Then we can make pen friends with them. We can write to them to help their study and thoughts and encourage them to be brave to face the difficulty. The more we do, the better our world will be!

Yours，

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: First of all首先；,Such as例如；and so on等等。We can write to them to help their study and thoughts and encourage them to be brave to face the difficulty. 我們可以寫信給他們，幫助他們的學習和思考，鼓勵他們勇于面對困難。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點：提綱作文。